o i like this!! I am not sure why but when reading this a sarcastic tone came at me...maybe that is my own preference but i do indeed like it!

hmm. I find this piece quite odd, simply because i literally can't make anything of it. I've re-read the poem twice, and still... many parts of the poem do I feel that it's incoherent in both syntax, and intention(s). I must thank you for the amusing read, however. - Arcane Devices

I really like this poem and your writing style. Great job. :D