This is beautiful, so soft and flowing. I think the words you use in this help to create that feeling of drifting along, being literally possessed. It's very nice. The only thing I'd change is the word "fake," because it seems too hard of a word, too plastic, if you know what I mean. I would use a word like "faux" instead. I think that would flow better with the poem. Beautiful job. Keep writing! :)

I really like this poem and your writing style. Great job. :D