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| blackberrydream 2008-04-26 ch 1,   | That was completly random and pointless but still very funny. Nice work. |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-04-26 ch 1, | That was pretty ... random. I liked it, but the surprise ending wasn't all that ... suprising? Maybe it's just cause I write too many surprises! (And just so you know, this isn't very short, I have written twenty-four 55-word short stories just for the heck of it!) But it was pretty good, and I agree with your first reviewer, you should make a series of random stories that have nothing to do with each other! That be great! It would make it more random! Write on! Pen.Dragon |
| poisedtokill 2007-07-26 ch 1, | Pft. *tosses hair* I have a shorter short story. Not that I'm competitive or anything. *shifts eyes* Ah. Travisman. We hardly knew ye. *solutes* And on a more serious note, he should have played his Nintindo. That much is obvious. |
| Eric-san 2007-01-11 ch 1, | The Story was random, pointless, and had no reason for existence. And yet, I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT, MAKE MORE STORIES! I also have a humor story in progress, review if u like. |
| RoXas-san 2007-01-11 ch 1, | That was awesome. My humor story is has the most humor at the end, which is the big twist. It will be done in about 7 and a half months, maybe longer. It's still funny. |
| Orin Falark 2007-01-10 ch 1, | That was a pretty rokin story, man. It was short, but you should make a seris of random, pointless short stories that have absolulty no connection to any of the other stories. Just a suggestian. that story was pretty funny too. |