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Reviews For: Life of a Baseball

DudeInHyrule
2007-04-20
ch 1,
abuseI think you had a HUGE chance to pull something really funny out of this, but most of the jokes in there fell flat. I reccommend re-doing it to make it funnier.
Makayla
2007-02-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour Cute!!

Tee-Hee.
Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan
2007-01-16
ch 1,
abuseyay! i feel bad for the basebal tho...
im goblins friends dierclaw
2007-01-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseyo gonlin hunter geese write a better strory
i mean no one wants to read about a baseball in third person
well even a story about sonic the hedghog would be better
o well
just do better stories b...
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