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| DudeInHyrule 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI think you had a HUGE chance to pull something really funny out of this, but most of the jokes in there fell flat. I reccommend re-doing it to make it funnier. |
| Makayla 2007-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour Cute!! Tee-Hee. |
| Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseyay! i feel bad for the basebal tho... |
| im goblins friends dierclaw 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseyo gonlin hunter geese write a better strory i mean no one wants to read about a baseball in third person well even a story about sonic the hedghog would be better o well just do better stories b... |