I loved this piece particularly the lines:

"The homes with yellow eyes wink out and glow"

&

"I can open a shell and hear once more"

They just add a magic to the whole piece that makes it pretty much perfect.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

Having read this, I think you might enjoy my piece entitled "Eidolon" & perhaps also "Spirit Dreams" although if you want a change of pace "Early Sunrise". Anyway I'd love to hear your thoughts on any of them. See what you think ^_^