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| MaryZeppelineWinchester 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abusethis poem is soo...me,'coz thats how i feel 24/7! your really awesome,great job! keep it up! |
| BahamutsTear 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWow if this poem were written with a certain meaning I have in mind it would all make perfect sense... Possibly fire as hell? Being yourself as in living your life without the restraints of belief? Or being blinded by the lies of that belief? ^^; at least that's my theory. I really like it btw. |
| blueroseofice 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem because its written in an almost detatched way. I think that style fits this poem much better than if you had tried to over fill it with emotions.Great poem never stop writting! |
| mepoindexter 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. "If you look far enough into my eyes, you're bound to find who's inside." |
| canoo 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseokay this one i like cause of the sorta subtle references to being in a fire, like in a burning building or something... everything from ashes and flames, not being able to see past a cloud, weak and hardly able to breathe. yeah, i like the imagery. |
| bittersea15 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Shows the true meaning of "eyes are the windows to your soul". I love it. |
| Lisa98 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abusei like your style of writing. i like how you let your mind make the poem. i can tell that they are true and it's not like you sit there looking for something to rhyme. youre a true writer and brillian.t good job |
| Dr-Pepper-2008 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseVery intreasting poem! KW |
| hateandkill-D 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseCOOL! Great job on this! Excellent, keep it up!! |
| Princess-anna57 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseYay! Thanks for posting. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I haven't heard from you in quite awhile, how are you? :) Keep writing and being awesome! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| silentscreamer07 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuse*yay* you have no idea how awesome it is that you finally posted up something new! i'm beyond excited! *woot* And this was really awesome...I loved the poem..I've missed reading your stuff, you need to post more often! :D I loved those first three lines, and you really ended this off nicely too.. "If you look far enough into my eyes You’re bound to find whose inside" And you know, it's true too...just by looking into someones eyes, I mean, really looking in their eyes, you can tell a little more about them, whether they're going through a hard time, or if they are just an all around happy person, the eyes really do capture that emotion..so I defintily loved this poem..it was awesome! *keep writing* and i hope you post more soon!! :D :D talk to you later! buhbyes:D ~britney |