Hm.I liked it.I have a slight infatuation with vampires.Almost every teenage girl does now...

So,this supposed to be part of a novella?Well, I hope you get it published.You're an excellent writer.(Also,you getting published would give me an excellent reason to brag about having had a one-sided conversation with an real author on the web...)You seem to be able to make seem real, and make things flow.If you said the purple bunny ate them in the end...I would probably believe it.This is fiction,after all.

Anyways,good job, and I hope to see more stories from you in the future.I also hope to see some of your fics back at updated...(Cough!Agape!Cough!)I guess that's all.Keep up the good work.

~Snowy Days

While I don't read much vampiric fiction (at least not of this variety, I like the meglomaniacal warlord vampires, i.e. Kain from Legacy of Kain, Alucard from Hellsing) this had some fun imagery. And I love imagery.

"you taste like silverware"

That's my favorite phrase. I don't know why.

~Cendri