as usual, its damn good. i loved reading through it b4, and its always worth reading a second time. post more.

good **, as always.
dont you have more of this one written alread?

I like this story a lot! Read all four chapters consecutively. Your character development is praiseworthy. Make sure you let me know when you add new chapters!

Man she rocks ! No hesitation ! Woot ! I love strong female characters ,they are so bad ** .Thoguh I liked this chapter alot I do have one complaint *sp* - River Dale . Please change that name it's so , so , so Lord of the Rings . Again this is just my opinion ^ ^ , and if the name is special to you I meant no offense xp .

:;shivers:: I love the description you used in this . I feel sad for her about loosing her home and you did an excellent job of potraying that emotion with such few words . Alot of people take's thousands of words to convey that feeling across while you only used hundreds . Kudos on that .

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