ZOMG!11!1! I LUV

ooh so continue please i kow you did it like i dont ages ago but please i really like it

aw its sweet so far, I like aiden already! i love the story cos its different to the other things you see, like the geeky girl falling for a jock etc. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Teehee,
my first ever review!
I really like this, it leaves a lot open for what could happen next... Hmm I don't really know what else to say apart from that i hope you continue!
And i didn't see many mistakes, or if i did, i can't remember where they were...
Anyway, this is going to get a bit of getting used to, writing reviews, sorry i didn't really have anything helpful in here.
looking forward to reading more!