 Broken.fire.angel 2007-01-10 . chapter 1Teehee,
my first ever review!
I really like this, it leaves a lot open for what could happen next... Hmm I don't really know what else to say apart from that i hope you continue!
And i didn't see many mistakes, or if i did, i can't remember where they were...
Anyway, this is going to get a bit of getting used to, writing reviews, sorry i didn't really have anything helpful in here.
looking forward to reading more! |