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| MDragons 2007-05-23 ch 4,   | So I like the way you had his mom find out, I wonder if he's going to crack under pressure because his dad is a hunter. |
| angel-Janna 2007-05-08 ch 4, | heya, I'm back again... nice little hook there in your chapter, I like the intrigue with Ryan's mum and Pierce! and the sudden drive off to the registry ... interesting... keep it up! *wishes for more coveted reviews for you* Janna x |
| EvilAngelKitty 2007-04-08 ch 4, | Cool stories. Werewolves rock. can't wait for an update ~evilangelkitty~ |
| Sonyashinto 2007-04-07 ch 4, | This story seems really good. I cant wait to read the next chapter. please update soon. Thank You! Ja-Ne =^_^= |
| Carmel March 2007-04-07 ch 4, | Hello hello! An excellent story you've got here :) And I absolutely love the title. Fuzzball. Heh. Can't wait for more! ~carm~ |
| FlamingDoritos 2007-04-07 ch 4, | ::grabs percent and starts pulling:: IT'S NOT WORKING! By the way, we should pants someone. |
| angel-Janna 2007-03-29 ch 3, | Yay, another chapter! I love your sarcastic and amusing tone. Sometimes people take werewolf stories a mite too seriously, so this one, complete with tasty mysterious pieces and interesting little quirks has got me hooked. Liking the bathrobe!:D Keep going! Janna x |
| another cc 2007-03-02 ch 3, | Update, please! I like it. |
| DORITOS THE AMAZING 2007-03-01 ch 3, | Well, that was awesome, and I love Morgan's dads. They need a moment, JUST FOR ME, okay? |
| guess whos back 2007-01-27 ch 2, | back again. tell a friend. :) kso. 'I cautiously turned my head so I could see the speaker- a dog. Mainly caramel with some darker patches on his face, he looked like some kind of cur to me.' NO. NOT TALKING ANIMALS. DON'T DO THIS TO ME, DIN. 'The female is Morgan and the male is **.' :) 'Biscuits.' :) 'I briefly wondered what a tranquilizer was; probably something to eat, I figured. It sounded tasty.' of course. :) |
| angel-Janna 2007-01-27 ch 2, | I'm reviewing again, I know... but tongue-in-cheek plus cool theme plus cool charachters are something you should always compliment! I'm gonna be a tiny bit picky... sorry... but wouldn't they be a wee bit more shocked that he's a were or are you doing something with the plot that I can't see yet? *blushes profusely if you are* but seriously though, I'm hooked... need...next...update... *puppy dog eyes* Keep it up!! V gd! Jannax |
| angel-Janna 2007-01-27 ch 1, | argh wow keep writing this! It's not just your werewolf story, it's a werewolf story with a rather cool twist... don't think I've ever read a story where the entire TOWN hunts weres before! twists like that are good, they keep people reading:D Keep it up... I ned more! *please??* Janna x |
| MarshmellowParis 2007-01-27 ch 2, | 'I was young and invincible; I had nothing to worry about.' Love it. |
| Doritos the amazing 2007-01-26 ch 2, | Hehe... so we're going to 'explore' his 'problem'? *perverted thoughts* Sounds educational. |
| G 2007-01-19 ch 1, | Please update soon. I want to read more. |