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cornered.sensations
2007-02-14
ch 1,
I love the descriptions here, you really draw the reader in and I feel as though I am there, stuck in the moment. (I wish on stars and intentionally forget the wishes). - i love thatline because I do that too, but perhaps for a different reason than you do. 'I feel so beautiful right now', a declaration of independence and the confidence in one's self, unusual in society nowadays, but great. Thanks for sharing thing
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