ARGH!!

I'm going Hulk on your **! lol
I don't like that Genji died, made me sad, and it made me angry that the story had to end that way.
It would have benn lots better if Genji had lived yet he and Rokuno wern't together or whatever.

But~
Good job, I did like the story and stuff, it is writen well...and stuff.

-Mr. Frost

Wow.
That was really scary and deep at the same time.
Good job.
Cittywolf

that was very dramatic... gawsh... TT__TT

Man, I think their parents totally over reacted. Well... I also think Genji over-reacted too but then I guess I don't blame him.

I kind of went on a search for other yaoi/shonen-ai incestuous type stories since I have recently started writing one. Yours is definitely way darker than mine. But it's still interesting to compare these two brothers to my own characters (brothers) as well as their parents.

Some more background information would have made this story perfect. Like how long had he loved his brother like *that*. Who his friends were. Ect.

Man, you were right about the character death. Man, that sucks. I hate when character's die! WAH! Well... of to go do more research... ie. Read other incest stuff. XD

*Sobs*
I seriously cried after I read this. It's so sweet, and twisted, and terribly sad. Very, very, very nice. It would have been nice if you had like them acting all brotherly for a while longer first (just my opinion). It would have been more shocking. Sad things make me sad. Argh, darn you sympathy pains. You did a good job of drawing people in, and then breaking their hearts. (I mean it in a good way ^-^;) I wish there was some way you could continue it... *hint hint*.

omg. that is so sad. i really liked this story. awesome job on it.

omg. wow. that was really good chapter

ahh! Your horrible...making me cry and such TT_TT

I liked it, I just wish the story had more detail but the plot and situation was so sad. *sobs in emo corner*

Oh, I just realized I read your other stories too. Hm, I usually don't read incest stories (except Angel Sanctuary), but this one seemed really sad. I never expected Genji to commit seppukku, so I'm wondering how the story would end up. This isn't the end yet, right?

Hmm. Interesting. This isn't the end is it?

aw this made me want to cry but it is also well written and i love it keep it up

Great chapter again, love! ^^ Sorry I haven't been on to review this sooner. xD I've been having some... Emotional difficulties, and ** at school. >>;; Mean boys picking on me and **. >

let him live!

oh wow that's so sad nice grammer by the way is this over?

O.O This story is so romantic! It's such an eye opener! Please continue the story!