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| Douglas Evans 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseLena continues to amaze. I normally wait on the edge of my seat for her poems to emerge and each one is better than the last. I enjoy her discriptive, concise, and detailed word usage. I also like how in many of her poems she manages to work in elements of nature and of the seasons, their changing, and their values into her writting. I would recomend her work to any publisher. So Lena, keep writing your beautiful works. |
| Osunale 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThe contrasts of heat and cold here are simply amazing, and the winter words envelop to fill me with a strong sense of a hard winter, with a strong overtone of pain. A very interesting piece with an incredibly powerful choice of words...it's all red and white and gray, and that 'oh my' shade of intense. |