Pretty good so far. The only fault I found was how Megumi figured out that Sumomo was a vampire so quickly without any real evidence... unless there was some background information that I skimmed over.

Wow! Though I must agree with you, the ending was a little anti-climactic. ^_^ But, really good! Love the way it ended! Sequal will be good! Daisuki!

Kimi-chan ^_^v ::chu::

i am changing my name to judoka now... lol

Keep going girl! I cant wait to read what goes next!

You really have a talent for making your stories interesting! I cant wait for you to keep writing more chapters! And since Bella and you are sisters, and Bella and I are the same person, Heart you Much Sister! lol

-Darth JoJo

I really like this so far. It's intresting.

O...M...G...! Wow! Holy crud! I love it! You have to keep writing, and I still have to post. Meh! You are amazing! Luv it!

really liked the added ending. can't wait to see how it'll turn out. i liked the orginal ending but this one is a little bit better. can't wait to read some more! ~ta-chan~

Flame Flame!

I'm totally kidding.

Love the chapter sis!

Kyoudai!

o so good!! aw and there's a thank you for me. *blushes* well you're welcome. ^_~ can't wait to read more. see u at DDR night!

Wow! This is good! I really like what you are doing with it. Keep it up and I will have to finish this soon. ^_^v See if you can figure me out?

::chu::

oo lala! so is Shikon gonna stay with Sumomo or what? omg i need to kno! i skipped out studying for the PSAT last night to read this. lol, oopsies. if i fail i'm blaming you. lol. jkjk!

much luff

xoxo and all that jazz

Velvet

this is cute, i like the idea of a vampire guide from someone as cute as Megumi. lol. that's fun. ^_^ keep it up!

xoxo and all that jazz

Velvet

YAY! ...so much...overload of OMGness...AH...but i love it!!1

Awsome, keep it up, maybe you could publish it? It's awsome.