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| Kasita Aco 2008-04-28 ch 1,  | abusePretty good so far. The only fault I found was how Megumi figured out that Sumomo was a vampire so quickly without any real evidence... unless there was some background information that I skimmed over. |
| Txngal 2008-03-08 ch 16, | abuseWow! Though I must agree with you, the ending was a little anti-climactic. ^_^ But, really good! Love the way it ended! Sequal will be good! Daisuki! Kimi-chan ^_^v ::chu:: |
| judoka 2008-03-03 ch 14, anon. | abusei am changing my name to judoka now... lol |
| Darth JoJo 2008-03-03 ch 14, anon. | abuseKeep going girl! I cant wait to read what goes next! |
| Darth JoJo 2008-03-02 ch 13, anon. | abuseYou really have a talent for making your stories interesting! I cant wait for you to keep writing more chapters! And since Bella and you are sisters, and Bella and I are the same person, Heart you Much Sister! lol -Darth JoJo |
| Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseI really like this so far. It's intresting. |
| Txngal 2008-02-27 ch 12, | abuseO...M...G...! Wow! Holy crud! I love it! You have to keep writing, and I still have to post. Meh! You are amazing! Luv it! |
| chiyuu 2008-02-27 ch 12, | abusereally liked the added ending. can't wait to see how it'll turn out. i liked the orginal ending but this one is a little bit better. can't wait to read some more! ~ta-chan~ |
| Imouto-Chan 2008-02-26 ch 11, anon. | abuseFlame Flame! I'm totally kidding. Love the chapter sis! Kyoudai! |
| chiyuu 2008-02-25 ch 10, | abuseo so good!! aw and there's a thank you for me. *blushes* well you're welcome. ^_~ can't wait to read more. see u at DDR night! |
| Txngal 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseWow! This is good! I really like what you are doing with it. Keep it up and I will have to finish this soon. ^_^v See if you can figure me out? ::chu:: |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-10-22 ch 8, | abuseoo lala! so is Shikon gonna stay with Sumomo or what? omg i need to kno! i skipped out studying for the PSAT last night to read this. lol, oopsies. if i fail i'm blaming you. lol. jkjk! much luff xoxo and all that jazz Velvet |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-10-16 ch 9, | abusethis is cute, i like the idea of a vampire guide from someone as cute as Megumi. lol. that's fun. ^_^ keep it up! xoxo and all that jazz Velvet |
| chiyuu 2007-10-15 ch 8, | abuseYAY! ...so much...overload of OMGness...AH...but i love it!!1 |
| Mayu-San-Sakura 2007-10-15 ch 2, | abuseAwsome, keep it up, maybe you could publish it? It's awsome. |