Really good poem, and you're right...why is it so hard? Writing out how you feel as you're feeling an emotion is always what makes the best type of poems.

A job well done. Keep up the great work.

i can identify :)

very good.

Excellent poem.

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Twilight Starr

Very, very good. It is a wonder why it's usually so dang difficult.