"The embalming fluid I do cater".

Lol.

I love how the mood seems to change so easily within the third verse, it's almost like an epiphany.

I hope to see more from you again! :)

Intersting. I'm not sure I understand it entirely, but I enjoyed it.

that's super special awesome and so much more...i love how the view of what's happening is skewed in some ways and that you can get into the mindset of such a person. just...amazing! ^_^

~Winter~

Ok,I have to say this: I LOVE this poem. It's amazing. I love the wording, the format, the bit of rhyming, the title, everything.You are a superb writer. I don't know what ideas this poem stemmed from, but holy crap, I wish I did. I am positive an entire novel could be written from it. You astound and embarrass me. Please keep writing...This is going on the favorites list.