brilliant story

Aww; sweet. Tastefully sweet. Although, I must admit, the line “Why’d you stop? That felt really nice.” made my skin crawl a bit. It was just a bit sudden. But then, the old "It's been nice having you in my class" brought it back down to earth. I'd like to see how the relationship had developed to this stage. Then I might be able to empathise with that one line a bit better!

Nicely done. You should contemplate writing more to this. It would be interesting to see where it goes.

Cute. It was pretty quick, though. But I get it. Nice work. ^^

Aw, I thought that was really sweet. Reminds me of when I said goodbye to my history teacher. Except I never got to tell him that I would miss him.