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| cbprice25 2008-06-01 ch 13,  | abuseWow... (it's over!) Almost seems a little abrupt. Great job with this one; I really enjoyed it. |
| Genato 2008-05-28 ch 13, | abuseI dunno why but i was expecting a romance part between siv and michael or something. The fic's good. Too short though but good. |
| Angel of Avarice 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseShe really doesn't make Hell seem so bad, Bastrd child number 667 I love that. |
| Sayae 2007-08-22 ch 13, | abuseThe story itself was awesome. I loved it and liked every character. If only more stories were like this. Great job. |
| awaiting.rain 2007-07-15 ch 13, | abuseat first i was hoping for some romance, but you were right, sic isnt the romance type. it sucks though, that she couldnt see her brother. i'm pretty big on family and i love my brother, so i felt really bad for her. |
| Zsadist 2007-06-13 ch 13, | abuseYay! I was kinda hoping at the beginning that there'd be romance in this story...But, the more I read, the more I agreed with you that Siv just wasn't that kinda girl. In fact, I'm pretty crazy about this ending! The story was good, the characters interesting. I hope you decide to write another Heaven/Hell story with possibly more chapters later on...*hint, hint* |
| Carmel March 2007-05-29 ch 13, | abuseThis story was fantastic. I love how you melded the narration with various descriptions and dialogue. Excellent word choice, too. Good job on this :D Thank you for writing it. You just made my week! ~carm~ |
| Erisah Mae 2007-05-11 ch 13, | abuseThis was fun- I liked the whole shattered stereotype characterisations, and I'm glad that the ending wasn't all romantic like it could have been- it would have been the biggest cliche, and kudos to you for evading it. I really enjoyed this. Erisah |
| Angel of Ink 2007-05-09 ch 13, | abuseOh my gosh, it's OVER? That's just the end? That's horrible, what about Siv & Michael (junior, that is)?? You're just not going to say what's happening? That's cold, man, cold. |
| Venus Smurf1 2007-05-07 ch 13, | abuseWell, the ending was a bit abrupt, but I liked it. Will you be favoring us with a sequel? |
| spikedmango 2007-05-07 ch 13, | abuseThat was definitely amusing. Soul in tupperware, heh. A nice short story. |
| Scales of Sapphire 2007-05-07 ch 13, | abuseHello! I enjoyed reading this story, it was a refreshing break him the classic demon vs. angel thing. Happy Writing! Scales of Sapphire |
| Bob Evans 2007-05-07 ch 13, | abuseWell! Finally we get to see how it ends! So glad you got your computer back. I trust you'll never let 'those who we do not speak of' try and fix it again. Sad it ended so soon, but with the way the plot evolved it was just perfect. Perhaps this is the last we'll see of Siv, but perhaps maybe not. Hmm...I wonder... ~Bob Evans |
| E. Clare 2007-05-07 ch 13, | abuseThis is kind of funny: Although this is named "Chapter Twelve", it's actually listed as "Chapter Thirteen". Coincidence? I think not. Amazing story. I can't wait for you to update ICAGW now!! e clare |
| E. Clare 2007-05-07 ch 12, | abuseI was so happy to see that "update" e-mail in my inbox. It made me feel better; between being as sick as I don't know what and loosing terribly in my race yesterday, it was nice to have some new material from you to read. I found it amusing that they all put the soul in a Tupperware. No idea why, but it made me smile inside. I also found it amusing that instead of saying "what the hell", Siv and Tyr would say "what the heaven". Kinda funny. Reminds me of how my characters in Bullets say "for the Devil's sake". Awesome work. Now I'm off to read the final chapter!! e clare Well, I'm off to read the final chapter! |