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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseHow appropriate, to write a self-deprecating poem in dedication to the king of deprication. I love the last few lines of this - "while the cyanide stirs inside." So poetic in both the idea and the rhyme, and very creative. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |