it's prettiful... :) i like it.

Wow... this was just wonderful. Also, how you told us what was 'wrong' with her was perfect. It was smooth, and just enough details to give us a good, vague idea of what happened. Vague in a good way. :D

[I wrapped my arms around his waist, letting it all out finally.] The 'finally' here, is a dangling.. modifier/adjective/, I dunno. I think it would be better if you reworded it as:

"I wrapped my arms around his waist, finally letting it al out."

This was a beautiful piece. It was great effect; how you didn't mention the guy's name. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten any reviews so far! Hmph!

Keep it up! :D