Me like, Me like, Rejoice and be Happy its the way of life lol
and as they say lightning never strikes twice in the same place so it can only happen once lol -soz couldnt resist putting in my motto there lol later charlie

Interesting poem--clear yet still poetic, with very nice imagery. Good use of metaphor. It did seem to run a little long, due to the number of short 2-3 word lines, but that's a stylistic choice and certainly nothing I can find fault with.

Keep on writing!

~Bitter Irony