Great twist at the end! (Today is 16 March. It's snowing like crazy. Two days ago, it was 26C. Eek.)

nice twist at the end, even though it was kind of anticipated because of the title. Still, it really shows how much we're not thinking about what this could be doing for our future. Good job! Keep on writing!

Oh this is nice! I love the rhyme and the diction, and the flow is superb. But I also feel a warning somewhere between the lines.. like, where is all this going to end.. Great write!

I completely agree! I love this! *adds to favourites* I also really like your pen name. ;) "Bother!"