i finally finished my exams and to treat myself i read your story. I know this is one of your older stories but it was the only one left i had not yet read. It was really nice. Ticked all my boxes for a great story. The use of letters was really (really) effective for character development and insight!! I wish you would have written one more chapter on their future together...but nevertheless i'm more than satisfied! Jake didn't end up finding anyone but with his character and looks i'm positive he had a happy ending too!! I'm really glad jake came back...=]

Thank you for your wonderful story!!

I believe this story was much more to my tastes than Captivated. I just love all the drama! The flow of the story is good, but the end is a little weak. I feel like there could have been one more chapter to just give it a sense of finality. Also, the story was consistently sprinkled with spelling and grammar errors. Perhaps an editing is in need? Other than that, it was quite enjoyable to read.

I don't generally gravitate toward the American Revolution, but it was interesting to see an HR set then, so I had to check it out. You didn't disappoint. =)

The story has a really good plot, and is very well written good job! Though I do think the Jacob alive part was a little out there it was still really good I loved the story.

That was AWESOME! I loved the way you made Drew rescue Jacob instead of killing him. Keep on writing.

I really like this story. it was so interesting

Thanks for the review on my story. I thought I'd return the favor and look at yours. I'm glad I did!

I've always loved historical romance especially when enemies learn to love one another. This was a very lovely exceptional story. I loved Drew from the beginning. Danny was sweet too, I feel so bad for him. But when he told Abby that Drew had killed Jake, I immediately thought, 'liar!'

I was so sad when he 'died' though. And was so happy when he came back! That was amazingly awesome.

I'll read your other stories some other time when I HAVE time. Great job though!

Hey! This story is really good so far, I love it! I'm also very glad that I changed my mind about my own story plot, otherwise it would have seemed very much like yours . . . I really do think that this story is great . . . I'll try to finish it as soon as I can!
~SunshineGirl

hi lee, i love your well written stories. tis bout abby and drew. how i wish there was am epilogue bout their weddin or something. i love your story on finding grey too. pls keep writing and update soon! thanks once more! beautiful!

i really liked this chapter, the scene with andrew escorting abby to the wedding was my favorite! It is so ironic how she doesn't see what it coming, that he likes her. I do hope she finds out soon :0)

I really like the end of this chapter! The dialogue with abby and andrew is very realistic and flows very well. I could almost imagine myself sitting next to the fire, wrapped up in a patchwork quilt and being handed a mug of cider for a nice, warm conversation. Your descriptions are wonderfully done :) On to the next chapter :)

This was really interesting. I started reading it about 5 hours ago and couldn't stop because I wanted to know what would happen. :) The characters were well developed, something that I told one of my friends during my short break to eat. She seems really interested, so you might have another person seeking this story out soon. :)

i have fallen in love with abby and andrew :) i can't wait to read more of this wonderfully written piece but i have 3 exams tomorrow and i must get up at 5:30 to study for one of them. like i said, great job :p

captain davenport... [sighs] he seems nice :) i love your description and how your story flows very well.

w o w .. that is a very well written first chapter.. i felt like i was watching a movie the entire time. You have a wonderful gift for imagery and making your characters realistic - both in biological person and inward character. I noticed that you had already completed this story but I wanted to give it a read just b/c i love revolutionary war era stories, especially those that involve patriots :)