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| Keefin 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThats a good story lots of action i have a question could you help me with my story i'm not far but i need help it's found at Also i have a question how to you edit alredy submitted chapters. Because i would like to add and fix my chapter one. |
| Yachi 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abusealsome story i like it yet there is some spelling errors other than that its pretty good! |
| Jon Lassik 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat way to start the book, though I recommend putting a little more detail into and between the story taking place. Other than that, great job, can't wait to read more. |
| spyder98 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseJust a few spelling mistakes and some grammar mishaps, but other than that very interesting plot. I'm ready for the next part! signed, Adrian |
| Nina Kindred 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting beginning. I'm anxious to see where this goes. |