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Reviews For: The War to End all Wars

Keefin
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseThats a good story lots of action i have a question could you help me with my story i'm not far but i need help it's found at Also i have a question how to you edit alredy submitted chapters. Because i would like to add and fix my chapter one.
Yachi
2007-05-17
ch 1,
abusealsome story i like it yet there is some spelling errors other than that its pretty good!
Jon Lassik
2007-02-06
ch 1,
abuseGreat way to start the book, though I recommend putting a little more detail into and between the story taking place. Other than that, great job, can't wait to read more.
spyder98
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuseJust a few spelling mistakes and some grammar mishaps, but other than that very interesting plot. I'm ready for the next part!

signed,
Adrian
Nina Kindred
2007-01-12
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting beginning. I'm anxious to see where this goes.
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