Reviews for The Online Chat Room

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AyumiYuy 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseI usually don't read stories unless they're complete, but I read your summary and in my interest forgot to check the status - so now I think I'll never know what happens because you haven't updated in 9 months! Oh well. You might find it funny to know that although nearly every slash fic I've ever read was written by a girl, as I was reading your story, I thought, "this one must be written by a guy!" And I checked your profile and was right, heh. So I guess your writing style betrays your sex, in case you care.
a beginner 2008-03-07 ch 10,	abuseu said in the last chapter that ur gonna finish it... plz y u stopped... keep moving...
caramel blazers 2007-12-25 ch 10,	abusei like this story. how they are all drinking, it seems pretty realistic.
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 10,	abuseAwsome chapter again you are an amazing author. I like Lauren better than Jessica only thing I noticed is you did the marker thing in the last chapter then said that Lauren introduced it in this chapter... sorry... KUDOS though
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 9,	abuseLol we played the lollypop game at a school canival once when I was younger even then I thought it was kind of odd and a little perverted. But I love this chapter and the last sentence was funny as hell... anyway off to 10
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 8,	abuseYep some new friends would benifit him. I hope that Talon gets over it. KUDOS on the chapter. I am off to read 9
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 7,	abuseYep life is a blur but also this was a damn good chapter. I like shana and I am disliking Daniel a whole lot. anyway KUDOS I will be reading the next chapter whne I get back from teh mall.
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 6,	abuseAwesome chapter Daniel seems.. I dunno.. Anyway I am glad he was able to admit he was gay to someone lol off to read the next chapter KUDOS
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 5,	abuseLol awkward conversations are always ... ackward... yeah I know that made a lot of sense but anyway cool chappy and I am off to read another one. I really do like Justin he reminds me of some of my friends lol
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 4,	abuseCool chappie lol gross waking up on a beerstained floor. Awesome chapter but another awaits my reading and reviewing lol so I am off KUDOS
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 3,	abuseI loved the way they met that was awesome. I wish the college I go to had this many freakin parties damn I go to a bland school.
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 2,	abuseHey Awesome chapter I hate Jessica's perky in the morning after persona but that is cool I have friends like that... I am off again to read the next chapter.
Kenya Bloodstone 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseThis story sounds cute Kudos I like Justin lol... Off to read the next chapter
dominic+leo 2007-11-27 ch 10,	abuseLOVE the story so far. how do you get your insperation (i knoe it's spelled wrong, please bear with me...writting is hard for dyslectics.) anyway, WHAT ... HAPPENS ... NEXT? does he hook up with computer dude or what. and when will you update? this story is to good for you to loose insperation so please don't and if you do you can borrow mine... i'm not using it very much (my characters don't like to do what i tell them to do, instead they go of and do their own thing... GRR!) sorry too much cafinee. anyway great story. hope you keep up with it.
dominic+leo 2007-11-09 ch 1,	abuseokay im getting ready to read your story (the online chat room, incase you have more than one) i printed the ten chapters because starring at a computer screen hurts my eyes, so when im done reading i promise i'll review, and if i don't you can hit me with an orangish blue flamingo. ( sorry i drank a cappacnio with two shot of caffine so im hyper) anyway, on to the reading. it sounds like it will be good. (rolls up in a comfy blanket on the sofa with hot coco. okay so what if i'm in school. i can dream can't i?

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