|Reviews for The Online Chat Room|
| Kenya Bloodstone 12/1/07 . chapter 4
Cool chappie lol gross waking up on a beerstained floor. Awesome chapter but another awaits my reading and reviewing lol so I am off KUDOS
| Kenya Bloodstone 12/1/07 . chapter 3
I loved the way they met that was awesome. I wish the college I go to had this many freakin parties damn I go to a bland school.
| Kenya Bloodstone 12/1/07 . chapter 2
Hey Awesome chapter I hate Jessica's perky in the morning after persona but that is cool I have friends like that... I am off again to read the next chapter.
| Kenya Bloodstone 12/1/07 . chapter 1
This story sounds cute Kudos I like Justin lol... Off to read the next chapter
| dominicleo 11/27/07 . chapter 10
LOVE the story so far. how do you get your insperation (i knoe it's spelled wrong, please bear with me...writting is hard for dyslectics.) anyway, WHAT ... HAPPENS ... NEXT? does he hook up with computer dude or what. and when will you update? this story is to good for you to loose insperation so please don't and if you do you can borrow mine... i'm not using it very much (my characters don't like to do what i tell them to do, instead they go of and do their own thing... GRR!) sorry too much cafinee. anyway great story. hope you keep up with it.
| dominicleo 11/9/07 . chapter 1
okay im getting ready to read your story (the online chat room, incase you have more than one) i printed the ten chapters because starring at a computer screen hurts my eyes, so when im done reading i promise i'll review, and if i don't you can hit me with an orangish blue flamingo. ( sorry i drank a cappacnio with two shot of caffine so im hyper) anyway, on to the reading. it sounds like it will be good. (rolls up in a comfy blanket on the sofa with hot coco. okay so what if i'm in school. i can dream can't i?
| Calista Boom 10/21/07 . chapter 10
Loved it, !Update! pretty please
| Blind Scribe 10/12/07 . chapter 10
nice of you to paint such a bleak picture of college for me. now i'll never graduate sober.
| Cinera 9/5/07 . chapter 10
There was some horrible mess up on the structure, I guess it rewrote the same paragraph twice.
Also, don't casually throw the word fag around. It's an awful disgusting word for one, and if people use it(even gay people, not sure if you're gay or not) then it makes it seem like it's okay. And it's not.
| Cinera 9/5/07 . chapter 6
It seems to me that Justin is a really shallow gay kid who just wants to get laid. Maybe you could go into more character depth? Him and all his friends just have sex and party.
| Cinera 9/5/07 . chapter 3
I don't know how to say this without sounding like a jerk, but don't think I'm a jerk because the story isn't bad. I just don't like the way it flows. But I'm going to read it anyway, even though it bores me a bit. I don't know, I'm only on chapter three. There's just a lot of pointless partying, it seems to me.
Maybe it gets more exciting later. Everyone knows fillers are a bitch to write.
| mia5081 8/26/07 . chapter 10
Ooh, your story sounds really cool so far! I hope that Justin finds the guy for him; I like Talon (his name does sound hot lol)...will they ever meet?
| ItalianQT 8/15/07 . chapter 10
UGh! I would be so pissed if i found puke on my car! Update soon! :-)
| multiples of six 5/22/07 . chapter 10
I like this story ) please update soon!
| Shindo Shuichi 5/21/07 . chapter 10
A big thing is the repeated part where he talks about Lance and his gayness stuff. That is all that was really confusing other than the fact that being drunk most likely makes everythin unable to be processed properly...