I LOVE IT! SERIOUSLY, IT IS AWESOME! So far my fav character is JUSTIN! Yuppers. Anyways PUH LEASE UPDATE! PRONTO! AND JUST TO LET U KNOW, IM ADDING YOU TO FAVORITES!

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I really like this story. the only thing that bugs me is the guy is gay. but I can deal with it. but yes. very good story. do you know when you'll put out ch. three?

I'm not feeling very creative tonight, so sorry if the review isn't all that inspiring. anyway, you're doing a great job with this. keep going. i want to know what happens next.

I really hope you update this soon! (or whenever you can). I think this story has a lot of potential. A lot of the m/m stories on here just don't work, or the plots are too cliche, but I think this one stands out. Keep it up!

Andrew G. My god, how long as it been? I find it so strange that you've come back to FP right when I started to browse again. Anyway, catch me up on your life again! I lost your sn ages ago, so remind me what it was?

The concept of this story is kind of hilarious. I wouldn't be too impressed if it were a girl/guy e-love story, but gay! guys! the lol.

Two things: First, I don't know how drunk Justin is/how high his tolerance is, but I'm impressed he manages to sound so coherent, what with the perfect grammar, capitalization and punctuation. Second, I think your biggest problem in writing is your tenses. They aren't horrible, but they can stop the flow of the story. So maybe careful on that.