|Reviews for The Online Chat Room|
| total vintage 1/30/07 . chapter 3
I LOVE IT! SERIOUSLY, IT IS AWESOME! So far my fav character is JUSTIN! Yuppers. Anyways PUH LEASE UPDATE! PRONTO! AND JUST TO LET U KNOW, IM ADDING YOU TO FAVORITES!
| Woah x3 MANN 1/26/07 . chapter 2
I really like this story. the only thing that bugs me is the guy is gay. but I can deal with it. but yes. very good story. do you know when you'll put out ch. three?
| eggsbenni221 1/26/07 . chapter 2
I'm not feeling very creative tonight, so sorry if the review isn't all that inspiring. anyway, you're doing a great job with this. keep going. i want to know what happens next.
| eggsbenni221 1/22/07 . chapter 1
I really hope you update this soon! (or whenever you can). I think this story has a lot of potential. A lot of the m/m stories on here just don't work, or the plots are too cliche, but I think this one stands out. Keep it up!
| Haute Couture 1/20/07 . chapter 1
Andrew G. My god, how long as it been? I find it so strange that you've come back to FP right when I started to browse again. Anyway, catch me up on your life again! I lost your sn ages ago, so remind me what it was?
The concept of this story is kind of hilarious. I wouldn't be too impressed if it were a girl/guy e-love story, but gay! guys! the lol.
Two things: First, I don't know how drunk Justin is/how high his tolerance is, but I'm impressed he manages to sound so coherent, what with the perfect grammar, capitalization and punctuation. Second, I think your biggest problem in writing is your tenses. They aren't horrible, but they can stop the flow of the story. So maybe careful on that.