very very interesting update soon please

The Jackals. They are going to be so cool!

-Who was your favorite character so far? the Memor

-Who would you enjoy seeing paired up? the Raelik and the Uptoe

-As a couple for later in the story? the Raelik and the Uptoe

-Who did you dislike the most? the last girl

-Are you confused somewhere? nope!

I still think the Memor's cute! I'd like to see what happens to her. Hymber and Valen seem like an interesting pair, too. Keep writing, this is good!

The Memor was cute. I'd have the last girl paired up with someone irritable.

I'd love to see where you're going with this.

Very intersting start. I'd like to read more for sure. There are a few spelling mistakes, and a lot of commas for sure, but nothing too bad :)

I would have liked if you had of made this part longer...I'm still not totally sure what is going on and why.

Last, it's a pet peve of mine to start a story/book/chapter/etc with 'And'. You should be able to find a way to catch the readers attention with something better then that.

Otherwise...very well done. Can't wait to read more :)