wow. this is beautiful. and i know what you're talking about. it was beautiful.

loved the imagery in the poem. This poem also had alot of emotion put behind it...Keep writing and posting!

Simple but effective - the symbolism of the rose has been well-used but for good reason! I like the way this is told as a story, and I like the circular motion of it and the way you learnt from your experience. I can see how writing this would have made you feel better.

- gold