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| lovelikeamixtape 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abuselovely lovely lovely. especially the beginning. |
| myalteredego 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's incredible. I love how it turns out to be not real, but a dream of sorts. The imagery is very good, and ending the lines, so to speak, with the conjunctions really gives it a broken up yet poetic feeling. Very nice! |
| the hidden exhibit 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusei like it. good use of vocabulary specifics :D i wrote a sort of reply that i shan't post here in case i steal your thunder (thats good for me, though :P) so visit, and review again! |
| lackluster 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseafter reading it all, i realized there wasn't a period in sight. amazing how you add life to the words. |
| Symphany is lyrical bliss 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abusePoetry for thought. i really enjoyed this one. probably my favorite one. |