lovely lovely lovely. especially the beginning.

Wow. That's incredible. I love how it turns out to be not real, but a dream of sorts. The imagery is very good, and ending the lines, so to speak, with the conjunctions really gives it a broken up yet poetic feeling. Very nice!

i like it. good use of vocabulary specifics :D
i wrote a sort of reply that i shan't post here in case i steal your thunder (thats good for me, though :P)

so visit, and review again!

after reading it all, i realized there wasn't a period in sight. amazing how you add life to the words.

Poetry for thought. i really enjoyed this one. probably my favorite one.