I like this. Poems without topic aren't aimed anywhere so they're pure

lol this is really gd-sounds like my brain or lack of it lol if u like plz R&R mine i like doing the of the top of the head stuff and randomn thoughts lol
wilko

This is great! Makes me kinda sad though. Nice job. I love all your work. Keep writing!!

This is interesting. I like the metaphors that you used; it gave your poem a subtle depth.