once again a fabulous story (no pun intended). I like how realistic it was. keep up the great work...

Wow...that was insane. I think it would have been better if Sydney was the one killed instead. No, I'm not sadistic. I just find it weird that a skinny pop star like her has the strength to kill a man, and a deranged one at that.

that was scary and gory (talking about the part with the cat and cheese grater).

that was really good for a one-shot.the background info was quick&to the point...the suspense was built up nicely,maybe a little rushed but it didn't detract anything[that's just me nitpicking].there were a few grammar mistakes but who doesn't have those?the conclusion was brutal&paid off...it was good to see a heroine who could fight back.Overall an exceptional story w/good pacing.good job,
David

I'll never lookm at a cheese grater in the same way again! >_

The stage lights shone down and the stage glowed a bright green. The crowd cheered as the music began. The room echoed The stage curtain fell down to reveal a group of dancers, all stood in a line, wearing matching outfits of red and white. The music then boomed out and the blonde woman begin to sing...

'I can make you feel, special..."

Sorry, couldn't resist.

This one's probably your best for originality, I liked it once I looked past the blood and guts of it all... cheese grater... ouch.

Also liked the fact that in most of your stories the hero/heroine totally kicks ** at the end, which is always good.

Alice Cooper kicks Rob Zombie's **.

Loves! x

The poems you put in your stories are really neat. The way you mix your poetry with your prose really gives your stuff a certain kind of rhythm. This story was quite enjoyable. I liked the little Button-Eyes reference you made, and the whole cheese grater to the face part was wonderful. The only flaw that I see in the story is that the characters could still use some more characterization, as in the stalker guy’s motives and such. I have trouble with characterization myself, actually.

I’m looking forward to reading some more of your stories, so keep them coming!