One of the best BL I've read.

:two thumbs up:

wow this is really good!

other than the that one sentence that is mentioned before.

Sad. It made me want to read more (so I'm off to read the sister stories).

... your writing style was clean and nice except one error that kinda bothered me. ^^; In the fifth paragraph, you wrote, "it’s just adding to me anger" and I'm sure you must have meant "it's just adding to my anger." I'm sorry, I know it's small! But everything else was so good, it stood out! ^^;

oh! baby! *huggles nameless guy telling story*
this is kinna sad. but well writeen, i likey!

ok, so u already know i love this! and we shud def show it to them but not say y...

i love these boys, both in real life and here!

so yea...