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| xoKapowxo 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abusewow this is really good! other than the that one sentence that is mentioned before. |
| AyumiYuy 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseSad. It made me want to read more (so I'm off to read the sister stories). ... your writing style was clean and nice except one error that kinda bothered me. ^^; In the fifth paragraph, you wrote, "it’s just adding to me anger" and I'm sure you must have meant "it's just adding to my anger." I'm sorry, I know it's small! But everything else was so good, it stood out! ^^; |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseoh! baby! *huggles nameless guy telling story* this is kinna sad. but well writeen, i likey! |
| 2old4fairytales 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseok, so u already know i love this! and we shud def show it to them but not say y... i love these boys, both in real life and here! so yea... |