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Tytherpol
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abusehaha i've thought that before, too. :)
it's interesting that you didn't ever include sound in this
the people one was badically just motion
and the other was only sight
i like that reasoning a lot better too, come to think of it.
and i really really like how it's all present-tense.
pretty sweet (short) poem.
my respects, -ty.
myalteredego
2007-01-13
ch 1,
abuseYeah, it doesn't make sense to me.

Kinda short otherwise.
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