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| Tytherpol 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusehaha i've thought that before, too. :) it's interesting that you didn't ever include sound in this the people one was badically just motion and the other was only sight i like that reasoning a lot better too, come to think of it. and i really really like how it's all present-tense. pretty sweet (short) poem. my respects, -ty. |
| myalteredego 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseYeah, it doesn't make sense to me. Kinda short otherwise. |