I could tell this was about a WWI or WWII plane, so great work there. It can be so hard to write about a subject without naming it. I love your imagery and the quote from the Gettysburg address fit perfectly. Beautiful work.

You have a knack for poetry; I found I can feel your meaning in this one very clearly, yet you put it in a way that's enjoyable to read. Well done.

That's a question that people should really ask themselves. Very true, and very well-written

Amazing. My favorite of the three I read today. You did a beautiful job with this one...

That was so cool... I could imagine everything about the time period. It was just cool! I--I'm just speechless. :)

The wars have effected my life because I respect and honor all the fallen soldiers that have died so I can be free today, I will always remember them. Keep it up.

Wolf.

Amazing. A very thought-provoking poem. I think the third verse was my favorite. Didn't spot any flaws, so yay for you. Keep it up.

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