Very, Very nice. I like this story! Will they find her? What's she like? What's her name? Well, I hope to hear the answers soon!

Hey, sorry I haven't read this agaibn for so long, life tends to become sidetracked that way.

Anyway the mood of the story is really interesting, and the shifting settings and perspectives greatly add to the effect. The slightly depressing, dark look of the story as a whole sets a feel that makes it very interesting to read. Keep it up!

Interesting opening, and I like the -What happens- formatting (I haven't tried using tags in reviews yet so if those bold ones up there didn't work that's why). I'm interested to see how it will fit into the Supernatural section.

Well howdy!

This sounds like an interesting one, as per usual with you. :)

The formatting is a little funky, but it definitely works for the piece. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

The one thing that bugs me is part of your summary:"a priest

leaves the Church to take confession from the dregs of society." I'm not clear on your meaning there - perhaps it needs rewording. Or my brain needs reformatting, one of the two.

Always a pleasure to read your stuff.

Cheers!

Bear Bum