Wow. Wow. ...wow. Incredibly poetic and raw. There are no extra words watering down the messages in these two prayers.

Bravo, my friend, bravo.

Wow, the whole thing kind of came rushing out at me. I'd advise putting it in paragraphs, even if it's in incomplete thoughts, just to make it appear less fearsome.

As for the prayer, the only word I can use to describe it is deep. It's wave after wave of paroxysm and emotion. Wow.