FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| GuitarShank 2007-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was written really well. I like your use of imagery and I especially like the part about human carnal desire. Your characters seemed very real and you've shown sort of a "friendship lasts forever" kind of moral. I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work. |
| CHIIJOY 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story. Goshers, she beat him up! But sometimes it's like you have to "go there" to be heard and protect someone but not over board with it. Enough of my rambling. Hehe. Great job. :D |