wow, i loved it!
the stories that are the most meaningful are the ones when the main character dies in the end and i think u did that beautifully
nice job!!

the deaths were a bit quick.. and some more description on the little boys corpse would've been good but i spose it was a short story lol
Thanks for usin me name m8 lol even tho twas 4 da witch :P always love to be tributed :)
twas a gd story keep em up

bex xx

different... this story was well written and believe i loved it, i just think that maybe you other four short stories were better...

M-hmm...I like it!

I felt myself really engrossed in the plot; I could really imagine the scenes being acted out in front of me.

~Xatriel.

P.S. Yes, I know this may sound quite stupid and uneducated, but...what exactly is PC?

Hi, I just read the beginning of your story and I was so grossed out, I couldn't read any more. It was so gory and amazing. I loved it!

P.S.-Could you read the first chapter of my story? I just posted it.

Hm, this one is ok. The dialogue is a little forced. Witches and stuff really aren't my cup of tea, so I wont say much more. I was reading on your profile thingy that you are 14 years old. When I was 14, I could barely string together a sentence...so, I am really kind of amazed. I don't want to swell your ego, though. You still have a lot to learn.

Then again, so do I.

Thought of anything for your longer story yet?