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| slashedtire 2008-05-24 ch 31, | abuseThis story was (simply put for my present inability to procure a better word from my mind) AMAZING! Kept me hooked till the very end. I was up all night, until 3:30 am reading this. I loved the story, but towards the beginning I was almost put off by the apparent lack of commas, which really bugged me. But I stuck in there, and I'm glad I did. I'd have to say the only thing you need to improve on is punctuation. Oftentimes you use that little "--" thing instead of proper punctuation, like commas or periods. All in all, excellent story. I'll definetly be looking forward to the sequel, which I'm too lazy to read right now. But you'll definetely see me around reviewing it sometime soon. --Slashed |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-05-11 ch 31, | abuseomg this story is freaking AWESOME but i have to admit, you really need to work on the summary, it kinda put me off. and you have a deviant art account? really? whats your name? because i have one too! have any artwork? sequel is a DEFINITE yes and update soon! i cant wait rto see what you have in store..; :P youre awesome ciao Sam |
| Ravens Wolf 23 2008-05-06 ch 31, | abuseI can't believe it's finished... I just spent the last week totally hooked on this story, it's without a doubt the most amazing thing ever written! Fantastic plot, amazing characters... and I can't believe it's over! This is definately gonna be an all time favourate! God, I love Sy! ^^ Thank you so much for writing this! I'm gonna go read it all over again now lol I wonder what other stuff you've written... (runs to your profile) Ravens Wolf 23 |
| Harley Quinn Davidson 2008-04-06 ch 31, | abusehell yeah you should continue, I love your story and a story about Abby would rock. I do have some artistic ability but not so much as to make a comic, but I think I might do some fan art. I have an account on deviantart as well, HarleyQuinn57 is my name if you want to contact me. |
| shaDow.kIssed 2008-04-01 ch 31, | abusewonderful and i do think she should have her own story it would probably be an awesome read =D |
| phoenix6787 2008-03-30 ch 31, | abuse*gasps and jumps around* omg! I would love to see more of this story. I enjoyed Cupid's Wolf so much and never wanted it to end. I think a sequel would be awesome! |
| poo-anonymous 2008-03-26 ch 31, | abuseAs part of your many adoring fans, I agree. "Could I please have some more, Sir?" "More?! MORE?! YOU WANT MORE?!" Hell yes I do. |
| Omok 2008-03-26 ch 31, | abuseOMG OF COURSE I'D LOVE A SEQUEL! THIS WOULD BE SO INTERESTING! Omok is VERY HAPPY about this. and CAN'T wait at all... at least, till the "Love of Abby" shows up...and etc etc..things like that =P IT'D BE SO COOL =3 ABBY TO HAVE A STORY OF HER OWN PLEASE! (and no offense, let it be gay.LOL) |
| Lynn's Love 2008-03-26 ch 31, | abuseOkay. I started reading this yesterday night, and now [after many interruptions] I've finished it. It was definitely interesting. A few times I had to go back and re-read a paragraph or so, because it seemed like you got the words "he" and "she" mixed up, but it was only 2 or 3 times. The fact that you added in some of the characters talking about you as if you were a part of the story caught me off guard. It was humorously refreshing though. I do think that it would be interesting for Abby to have a story of her own, as long as it differs enough from her parents'. b.t.w, I had to explain to an older guy friend of mine how lesbians had sex, so I feel Sy's pain. Overall, I think that it had a good story line, that, if you're interested in the beginning, it keeps you on your toes the entire time. I really didn't expect Sy to live, but after thinking about it, I knew she would. Hopefully my ranting will be of some help to you. |
| master of suspence 2008-03-26 ch 31, | abusewhen i first got the email telling me that u have updated Cupid's Wolf i was surprised i thought you were done with it... but i was wrong you have to continue with it now after that last chapter it would be wrong to just leave it hanging like that you have to do a sequal! ~Alsye |
| briannathewriter 2008-03-25 ch 31, | abuseOMFG! Abby totally NEEDS her own story! Dear God, I had forgotten how much I loved this whole plot and the characters. Hey, what is your deviantart account? I have one up there, and though I'm not the best at sketching, I am pretty talented with some unconventional means of art. I'd love to make a print or two after Cupid's Wolf. |
| Dean P Thomas 2008-03-25 ch 31, | abuseIt's a nice touch. And you know that I'd love to see a sequal. |
| looneyli91 2008-03-25 ch 31, | abuseO_o; *bounces* Sequel, sequel, SEQUEL! *clears throat* sorry, lost my cool there for a second. I totally lol'd at the whole "having to explain lesbian sex" thing =P it felt a bit cliched the way you had Sy say the whole power inheriting thing... but a sequel sounds like a kick-butt idea ^.^ (psst!! If you need a beta, I'm your girl =D) |
| Water Queen 18 2008-03-25 ch 31, | abusePlease make a sequel. I want to see this story continued. |
| bloodyfangs 2008-03-25 ch 31, | abuseWhen I saw another chapter added I had to blink a few times! lol I dont have this story on alert but I do have it as a Fav, so heres to hoping my vote still counts for a sequel. |