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Reviews For: The Diary
anterapalet 2009-11-28 . chapter 1
Wonderful
I loved the ending
Any chance of you writing a bit more about what happens next?
Ravenna Blythe 2009-02-14 . chapter 1
Kya! Sugoi!
So kawaii...I love it, love it, love it!
Keelala 2008-03-18 . chapter 1
Ah that's one story (and author) I'll recommand whenever I can.

It's well written (and I, for one, really appreciate that), it's interesting and clever, moving at times but never mushy.

So few reviews for such a good story... makes me feel privy to some hidden treasure. ^^
S 2008-01-24 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, I love it.
vspirit 2007-08-22 . chapter 1
Wow. I love your style. It has just the right amount of lavishness to give the story a classic sort of depth but not so much that it's become overridden with opulence. I suppose the balance of Makoto's harsh reality countering Tsukasa's semi-charmed one plays a part but it's mostly your style, I feel. And I love the way you have told this story. My initial desire was for a sequel but after the story has sunk in completely, I think the way you have ended it is just fine. A shortish sequel to tell us what the guys are up to now would be delightful, yes, but it works even without and left to our imagination.

Thank you for writing this. Truly.
Promiscuous Misprocuous 2007-03-28 . chapter 1
*yays* That was great! I so wish that I could join some bigshot hottie in the future through a diary... *sich* oh well. That was awesome. Seriously. Great. I'm happy, now.
jay 2007-03-25 . chapter 1
i absolutely loved the ending and the entire story, just like i have loved you're other stories. great with the originality and plot and wonderfullness
HumanInfiltrator 2007-03-09 . chapter 1
Another smash hit with HI!

I think I love you. lol
Lady Psychic 2007-03-01 . chapter 1
Wow, this story is just as good as your other one! It was well written, had a great plot, and likable characters. I hope you shall continue to write and post more stories.
Pysche 2007-01-31 . chapter 1
Another wonderfully sweet and sexy story! I fell in love with the characters right from the beginning, and I think I was as upset as Makoto when the diary suddenly stopped, lol. The surprises at the end were great, too; how the shrine god had been scheming all along, and Jin showing up for the band application. I love a story that has me rooting for the characters to finally be happy, and this one just fit the bill. Great job!
Tekia 2007-01-24 . chapter 1
Tsukasa is my favorite name ever! I squeeled when his name was reveiled. This story is so beautful, and Taka is in a band! I really hope you write more, I can't wait.
wilko4523 2007-01-15 . chapter 1
wow this is amazing i read assembly of the gods to there both so great, how do u make it flow so easily lol
hugz charlie
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