Brilliant. It was so picturesque, so eloquent, yet very abstract. And now it's a new favorite of mine. Wonderful job, I loved it.

wow, I really like this. The last twolines are especially catchy. It's in some spots a little twisted, but undeniably true.
Nice job on this one.

I like. The visual imagery is great, it's so vivid and viscous. Keep it up.

Very, very wonderful. You've done wonders with word choice and pulling abstract thought together while keeping a consistant theme.

Always write on!