Very nicely done!

You know, I can actually relate to this poem. On many occasions, I am sad to say. There is this guy I know that will never, ever really like me, but I can't help being a babbling cretin when he's around.

::sigh::

Well, that's love I guess. Good luck with your man! And keep up the great poetry. I love hearing from you.

~ Cactus

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