O_O!! omg this poem is tres tres bien!! (eh...very very good in french >_>;; lol) hm...i like it ...short and sweet ^_^

omfg, that was effin amazing! i love this, it really touched me.

This is great... the rhyme scheme was a bit sporadic, but it worked out. The French really gave it an interesting touch. I think it helped the mood of the poem. Good job!
~Daughter of the Faeries

I hope that isn't what your "vie" is like... good, though.

Such is life...I love the poem and the rhythm and rhyme in this poem. Keep writing!