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| covered 2008-07-23 ch 16,  | abuseYES! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! and for the record, i would NEVER give up on this story |
| blair powers 2008-07-22 ch 16, | abusehey!! i just read the story and i love it! its funny and cant wait to see the next confrontation b/t indy and cole!! post again really soon :) |
| mylifeismine 2008-07-21 ch 16, | abuseUpdate |
| kailahboo12 2008-07-16 ch 16, | abuseWow. I kind of saw it coming, but the way you did it as pretty sweet. |
| belle1220 2008-07-14 ch 16, | abusenice story. |
| x3life 2008-07-05 ch 16, | abuseaww i just started reading this series and its so cute!! and good =) |
| MackayFire 2008-07-02 ch 16, | abuseThis story is flippin' brilliant! Cole is so m and Indy is so cutely oblivious! Can't wait to read the next chapter :) |
| unidentified elephant crap 2008-06-30 ch 16, | abuseI'm in love. The fact that Sarah has an abusive father makes me want to read on, but the other is that COLE & INDY, MON. This sorta reminds me of 10 Things I Hate About You. It makes me all giggly inside when Wendy and Indy like nurd-turds. ;D But.. yeah. I think I might cry in the next update... I absolutely adore this part: “Hmm.” Kim was examining the magazine page intently. “Oh, and Cole’s been looking for you. It’s verging on the point of desperate. You should probably just give up and just take it all off.” “What do you mean? Take what off?” I was distracted as I peered over her shoulder in wonder at a stunning red dress draped over Natalie Portman’s killer figure. “Your clothes, before he, you know, rips them off of you.” Hi-larious! xD Anyways. Expecting an update, yes? (: - .raiin |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 16, | abuseoh abusive father =/ |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 15, | abusehmm im sure shes probably thinking of the wrong thing |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 14, | abuseaw poor indy =/ |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 13, | abusehaha physical fight over wally! wo! |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 12, | abuselol ouch wallys going with diane tsk tsk |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 11, | abuseaw hes falling for her =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abuselol now how is she gonna get her 600 dollars? and yayy she can go to the dance =] |