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| Mestophilies 2008-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseYes, continue, PLEASE! |
| Annerire 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseIt's good, and I think you should continue it, but it is a tad rough-however, there's a LOT of promise to it. I honestly hope you update soon! Keep writing-fluidity comes with practice! (I sound...old. Oh, jeez, patronizing too--I'm sorry!) |
| zagato 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abusePlease continue. If it has some plot and action, I can add this to my favorites. Thank you! |
| alice 2008-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease do. you have a wonderful beginning, i would like to see how you continue. |
| hannah 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh please do. it sounds exciting. |
| Censored 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseDAMN RIGHT YOU SHOULD! I've been looking through stories all day. This is the only one I've seen that I like. It shows some promise. |
| Rogue-writer-16 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseyes, please continue. it seems like such an intriguing story. I think i like it so much because i'm a book-worm secretly hoping to one day disapear inside my fantasy worlds. lol. any way, sounds like a good start, i'll be waiting for more! Bye. RW |
| Foreverswimming 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It sounds like Tarazan though but other than that it sounds very interesting. I hope you continue. I also hope you continue your other stories as well. Ruler of the Freakin' World ~foreverswimming |
| Wyvernwings 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseHm... Sounds an offal lot like Tarzan an Jane, but it's one of those stories that is coming to a point in it's life where it will be remade. I think that it's a good idea, but I'd watch your step and stay clear of the cliches that Tarzan will present to you otherwise the reviewers will go ape. *I couldn't resist.* But I like it. I think it's all up to you. The Wyve |
| Rose Jameson 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseUM HECK YES CONTINUE! |
| ephona 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseloved it please continue |
| chinx 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThis fic seems really interesting and good so far. I deffinetly think you should continue |
| .Undecided.And.Confused. 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like Tarzan or Jungle book...what did it say in the first chapter of the book. Do you have a general idea of things you want to happen in this novel? Better make even a rough outline if you don't know what you're doing. Out wise the idea sounds interesting. |
| self-destructing in 30 seco... 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI am liking this. Quite interesting and I'm waiting for more. |
| Mary 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseContinue, this story sounds great. I want to see what happens. |