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Mestophilies
2008-08-10
ch 1,
abuseYes, continue, PLEASE!
Annerire
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseIt's good, and I think you should continue it, but it is a tad rough-however, there's a LOT of promise to it. I honestly hope you update soon! Keep writing-fluidity comes with practice! (I sound...old. Oh, jeez, patronizing too--I'm sorry!)
zagato
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abusePlease continue. If it has some plot and action, I can add this to my favorites. Thank you!
alice
2008-05-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease do. you have a wonderful beginning, i would like to see how you continue.
hannah
2008-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh please do. it sounds exciting.
Censored
2007-11-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseDAMN RIGHT YOU SHOULD! I've been looking through stories all day. This is the only one I've seen that I like. It shows some promise.
Rogue-writer-16
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseyes, please continue. it seems like such an intriguing story. I think i like it so much because i'm a book-worm secretly hoping to one day disapear inside my fantasy worlds. lol. any way, sounds like a good start, i'll be waiting for more!
Bye.
RW
Foreverswimming
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI like it. It sounds like Tarazan though but other than that it sounds very interesting. I hope you continue. I also hope you continue your other stories as well.

Ruler of the Freakin' World

~foreverswimming
Wyvernwings
2007-01-16
ch 1,
abuseHm... Sounds an offal lot like Tarzan an Jane, but it's one of those stories that is coming to a point in it's life where it will be remade. I think that it's a good idea, but I'd watch your step and stay clear of the cliches that Tarzan will present to you otherwise the reviewers will go ape. *I couldn't resist.* But I like it. I think it's all up to you.

The Wyve
Rose Jameson
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseUM HECK YES CONTINUE!
ephona
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseloved it please continue
chinx
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseThis fic seems really interesting and good so far. I deffinetly think you should continue
.Undecided.And.Confused.
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseThis sounds like Tarzan or Jungle book...what did it say in the first chapter of the book. Do you have a general idea of things you want to happen in this novel? Better make even a rough outline if you don't know what you're doing. Out wise the idea sounds interesting.
self-destructing in 30 seco...
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI am liking this. Quite interesting and I'm waiting for more.
Mary
2007-01-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseContinue, this story sounds great. I want to see what happens.
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