whoa that was good update soon though

UPDATE! UPDATE!

Awesome story, just the thing i was looking to read. :D Please update!

oh go on pleasee continue!! i need more!

Hi!! I see you haven't updated in long time!! Please update soon, I love this story already!!(^.^)

Yes, continue, PLEASE!

It's good, and I think you should continue it, but it is a tad rough-however, there's a LOT of promise to it. I honestly hope you update soon! Keep writing-fluidity comes with practice! (I sound...old. Oh, jeez, patronizing too--I'm sorry!)

Please continue. If it has some plot and action, I can add this to my favorites. Thank you!

please do. you have a wonderful beginning, i would like to see how you continue.

oh please do. it sounds exciting.

DAMN RIGHT YOU SHOULD! I've been looking through stories all day. This is the only one I've seen that I like. It shows some promise.

yes, please continue. it seems like such an intriguing story. I think i like it so much because i'm a book-worm secretly hoping to one day disapear inside my fantasy worlds. lol. any way, sounds like a good start, i'll be waiting for more!
Bye.
RW

I like it. It sounds like Tarazan though but other than that it sounds very interesting. I hope you continue. I also hope you continue your other stories as well.

Ruler of the Freakin' World

~foreverswimming

Hm... Sounds an offal lot like Tarzan an Jane, but it's one of those stories that is coming to a point in it's life where it will be remade. I think that it's a good idea, but I'd watch your step and stay clear of the cliches that Tarzan will present to you otherwise the reviewers will go ape. *I couldn't resist.* But I like it. I think it's all up to you.

The Wyve

UM HECK YES CONTINUE!

loved it please continue