Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)

~Carm~

Great chapters! I'm really liking the way the characters are interacting with each other. It's serious at times, lighthearted at others. I'll be waiting to read more of this!

~carm~

Oh, wow. Great set of chapters. I love the way you narrate this story. It's paced just right and the amount of dialogue and description is perfect. I can't wait to see what's going to happen!

~carm~

Very entertaining story so far. I like the mystery aspect to it, it's very interesting :) Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~