great story! this is amazing and I can't wait for more!

** Update already! It's been forever and I wanna know what happens. please let them stay togehter and for Gods sake have Carmine get over his 'issues'!!

MORE SOON!

~shadow

I have to say, I've never come across one of your stories that I didn't like. I think what makes your characters endearing is that they are so realistic. Not many writers feel comfortable with making their characters flawed, yet that's what makes them human. Carmine and Shay are by far the most intriguing couple you've paired up so far (unless Brett and Mahir start dating)not only because of the manner in which they met, but because they are such polar opposites. I'm addicted to your stories, and was wondering if you were going to continue this particular one (also The Two of Us, which I also love)or if its no longer in your plans. I don't want to be one of those pressuring type of reviewers, I'm just curious. d i a m o n d h e a r t 5 5 5 @ a o l . c o m

You need to update this please :)

Well, since I liked this Whole story enough to read it all in one sitting I figure I own you a quick review before I go pass out. :)

So simply put, I really really like this story. Quite the original idea lol. I was pretty happy when i found this sequel. I love Carmine and Shay and I hope you haven't abandoned this one. It seems Carmine has some issues to work out yet...

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

This might be a stupid question, but are you going to write again? I really enjoy your stories.

you haven't updated in so long, and I love this fic! I love how ** up Carmine is and he knows it and tries to change. It all just feels so real, not just like the 'oh I just met you and am madly in love with you' stories.

I really hope you continue this!

I'm so happy there is a sequel! xD

You are, eh, alive right?

For some reason I have an image of Nonno lurking around pillars in a trench coat waiting to pounce on Carmine and nag him to death. It amuses me. Out of curiousity, though, why didn't Nonno (or the other members of Carmine's family) try to contact him before? Did the Solicitor track him down? Anyway, great story so far. I'm glad Rob will at least have a family of sorts. Update soon!

I'm getting a bit worried...you haven't updated in four months, that's quite a long time for you. I hope everything is okay...

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Awesome. Can't wait for more.

Do you really think someone as reviled as you should be posting pictures of your family, especially your child, on the internet for everyone to see? Aren't you scared?

sorry my reviewing has been slack for this story! i will review the next few chapters in the next few days as it is nearly 2 in the morning. I love Carmine! He is up there with Brett as my favourite of your characters. I also love the appearances of his Nonno...the 'you speak like an Australian' made me laugh because I can see my Nonna saying the same thing...even my mother. I really love the way this story is evolving and we get a better idea of where Carmine came from. Written wonderfully as always, I can't thank you enough for the always entertaining and fluent reads!
xx