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Reviews For: Of Service and Ice Cream

eliza-smiles
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseomgosh...i couldnt stop laughing when she blew the rasberry...hahaha funny as... cant wait to read some more...cheers, eliza
jinx89
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuselovely! I should probably mention I'm a new reader before I start rambling off about what a great story this is. Or, at least, the first chapter is great. Ur character kinda reminds me of me. I'm usually very sarcastic...ahem. Moving on: I liked this chapter. It gives a good idea of what the characters are like. It also shows a lot about Ellie. So, yeah, coolness. Keep it up!
Simple Thoughts
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseInteresting...can't wait to see where this is going.
Jenny G.
2007-01-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like this so far, but I want to see more people interaction and conversation. El's voice is interesting to listen to, I like her and I normally don't like first person POVs.

Ellie's just one big kid, just like me! Please continue this story, I know you don't have the best record of continuing stories, but that doesn't mean anything. Continue this one. And what's the thing about service? I get the ice cream part but so far no community sevice detail.
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