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| eliza-smiles 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseomgosh...i couldnt stop laughing when she blew the rasberry...hahaha funny as... cant wait to read some more...cheers, eliza |
| jinx89 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuselovely! I should probably mention I'm a new reader before I start rambling off about what a great story this is. Or, at least, the first chapter is great. Ur character kinda reminds me of me. I'm usually very sarcastic...ahem. Moving on: I liked this chapter. It gives a good idea of what the characters are like. It also shows a lot about Ellie. So, yeah, coolness. Keep it up! |
| Simple Thoughts 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...can't wait to see where this is going. |
| Jenny G. 2007-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this so far, but I want to see more people interaction and conversation. El's voice is interesting to listen to, I like her and I normally don't like first person POVs. Ellie's just one big kid, just like me! Please continue this story, I know you don't have the best record of continuing stories, but that doesn't mean anything. Continue this one. And what's the thing about service? I get the ice cream part but so far no community sevice detail. |